Writing Prompt: Blonde

coffee-1300181_1920.jpg“What kind of coffee should we get?” Sonya asked. Rod wasn’t paying her any attention.

“Rod?” he was staring off into space.

“Rod!”He jumped, like a sleeper waking from a dream.

“What?” he took a deep breath, as if he had been submerged in cold water.

“You okay?” Sonya placed a hand on his shoulder. He turned away from her, as slow version of an angry twist.

“I’m fine.” he croaked. “What did you ask me?”

“Are you sure?” he insisted he was fine. “All right. What coffee roast should we get? The French or the Blonde?”

“Can’t have both, can we?” he joked, a dead smile on his face. “Can’t have the french blonde?”

“No such thing in the coffee world.” Sonya grinned. His eyes were distand, his heart not fully invested in the joke or the moment.

“The french is fine.”

 

 

I notice that this is very white room, but I wanted it to be character focused and driven. I’m working on white room skills, now. How to describe the setting without going full Moby Dick on it.

Maureen Llomond.

How to Use PokemonGo! For Your Writing (Instead of Procrastination Fodder)


PokemonGo has finally come! I’ve been stalking this for about a year, now! I was so excited about this game! And it seems that the rest of the world is, too. Everyone is playing it and those that aren’t are pretty annoyed at people who are, not unlike feelings about literally EVERYTHING ELSE!!!

Like I said, I’ve been stalking this game for about a year. And many people have only JUST found out about this game. So… What’s the big whoop?

Why Am I Excited?

  • Childhood: I never got to play Pokemon as a kid, we really never played video games unless it was at my Grandmas with the cousins. They all showed me their Pokemon games and the trading cards and they even watched the cartoons while I was there. I heard all about Team Rocket and Ash Ketchum and Pikachu. Lots of it really didn’t stick. But my husband got to, it was a large part of his childhood. He gave away his Pokemon cards, even though now, several of them would be worth several HUNDRED DOLLARS. That’s right, CARDS WORTH HUNDREDS OF DOLLARS. That’s insane!!! I never got into it. My mom wanted me to play outside or something silly like that.
  • Money: PokemonGo is free to play on a device that I already own! We really don’t have the money to get a NintedoDS (one of the only devices this franchise is available to play on now) or purchase the games. And if I wanted to “catch ‘em all” I would have to go back to one of the FIRST pokemon games; Pokemon Red or Pokemon Blue. https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Pokémon_Red_and_Blue. And then work my way up through the versions, transferring as I go. INSTEAD, I’m burning through my data like a pyromaniac with Bill and Hilary at the end of their term! (Okay, bad joke, but true!)
  • Exercise: The whole app is based around MOVEMENT. This means if I want to advance myself, I have to get out and walk every single day. It’s the best way to catch Pokemon, just go on a walk for an hour every single day. Just around your neighborhood. The more afield you go, like hiking, the rarer the Pokemon are. I don’t hike, but a walk around the neighborhood should get me some high enough powered monsters!

Everyone else has their reasons to be excited for PokemonGo, wether it’s showing the franchise to your kids for the first time, revisiting your childhood, or being introduced to a new and fun way to exercise; there’ no denying PokemonGo is HOT right now.

But what about those of us who write for a living? What are we supposed to do with this new time suck. It’s worse than Facebook, I tell you!

How to Use Pokemon Go to Your Advantage if You’re A Writer

  1. Don’t Download the App; I know this sounds SO basic, but it’s true. Don’t play. Delete the app. Walk away. If you tell people that you’re not going to be playing anymore, they will be okay with that. I promise! If they’re not, they don’t belong in your life. Taking writing seriously is YOUR decision. Of course you can support your friends as they play, because they support you, so return the favor.
  2. Go on a daily writing walk, with a distraction. Yeah. Walking really is one of the best things you can do as a writer. Walking around and thinking about your writing. If you have a momentary interlude of catching a Geodude while out and about, whatever, good stuff.
  3. Observe other PokemonGo players. Have you seen how it transcends gaps? There are SO MANY gaps in our culture right now. Political, socio-economic, racial, generational, gender and sexual orientation. Those gaps are not going to go away without some hard work, but having a common ground doesn’t hurt. Because everyone is human doesn’t appear to be enough for everyone, I’ll take a mobile game. And it’s the perfect real world example of a Oasis style game for sci-fi writers!
  4. Give your brain a break. If there is something I’ve learned while being on haitus, there can be too much of a good thing and you can put too much stress on yourself about that good thing. Thats kind of what has happened with the #writingexcuseschallenge. Don’t get me wrong, I’m still going to do it! But I’m not going to BEAT myself up about it or try to catch up on posts. If I post, I post. If I don’t, I don’t; not a big. Just one day at a time. 

So, get out there and CATCH ‘EM ALL! Just remember how to use it to your advantage as a writer. Always be looking for ways to improve your craft. 

Also #TeamValor #TeamHarmony…

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Maureen Llomond

When you left your motivation in your other pants

The problem with life changing events is that they always land smack dab in the middle of when I’m trying to do something proactively life changing. It happens every freaking time. Every time.

Back in March, I had been having some problems with nose bleeds lately, like super bad. Like six and a half hours bad. Not as much fun as it sounds and if it sounds like hell, you’re pretty close. There were some mysterious bruises showing up on my legs and my gums were bleeding. After taking more vitamin C and little improvement, my dad requested that I get a CBC. I complied, because daddy, and he was right to ask me.

My mom and I were driving to a jewelry party thrown by my mother-in-law when I got a call from my doctor. It was six o’clock at night, so I assumed it was urgent. My platelet came back incredibly low and my doctor requested that I go to the emergency room immediately. Panicked, we changed our route immediately and went to the emergency room. Of course, they did the usual garage of tests, short of shooting me full of radiation to look at my insides. And, I sat and worried. Along with my mom and my dad and my husband and the baby and my best friend and her husband. It was a packed little room. When you hear “low platelet count”; of course the inclination is to think the big “L” word: Leukemia.

After three hours of waiting, they came back  and told me it wasn’t Leukemia. I had something I had never heard of: idiopathic thrombocytopenia pupura. 

Yeah. Mouthful.

Essentially, my body is having an allergic reaction to my own white blood cells. It’s an auto-immune disorder. It CAN be chronic, but only in rare cases. I’m on my second round of treatment, and it’s going really well so far! Things are looking great!

SO, that’s the reason why I haven’t posted. Along with that and me and my family finally moving into our own little home, my schedule has been PACKED. 

I am really only posting this to inform you where I’ve been and to let you know that I’m going to be posting more frequently.  I need to get back on the band wagon and start writing again, write instead of trolling twitter. Or playing PokemonGo from my bed. Like camping the PokeStop across the street from my house. I’m sad, I know.

You’ll be hearing from me soon!

Maureen Lomond

#WritingExcusesChallenge Day 17

And we are trucking along… trucking along…

Writing Excuses Podcast 10.17

I’m not going to take forever carving out my answers to the questions with this one. Seriously. I’m just not. I need to get to the good part, the prompt. SO lets cut to the chase. Really, if you want to know all the answers, just listen to the podcast and support these awesome people.

Writing Prompt

Take the world-building you’ve done, write your beginning, and then secretly write down your “gee-whiz.” Now run that beginning past some alpha readers, and have them attempt to identify the “gee-whiz.” Compare their answers with your own.

I’m not even joking, JUST did this with my Dad and my friend Astrid (HAAAAIIII STRIID!!!) I will update you in the morning with the text convo that they send me!!! I’ll even send it past my mom, perhaps.

CHECK!!!!

***UPDATE*** (Literally Five Minutes Later)

This is what my lovely friend Astrid told me when I sent her my beginning.

Honestly, no. It’s good but it’s almost formula, doesn’t feel natural enough. The genre and tone make me feel interested but I want something new, something engaging, a mystery or a lead, something that makes me question my worldview or morals or something bizarre. I love the style of diving right into dialogue. But as someone who has watched every action film on the planet, (like many of your readers may have) I want you to SHOCK me. I mean, hardcore. Death isn’t shocking anymore, scandals don’t necessarily intrigue because it feels normal. Give me something INTENSE to grab my attention. 🤓 I don’t know what that is haha. But you can do it!!!!!!

#WritingExcusesChallenge Day 16

Hi.

I know. It’s been like a week. I’m sorry. I fell off the band wagon and have about 4 days worth of content to get caught up on. And… I’m sorry. And I love you guys. All five of my subs. I love you, I promise.

I’m not gonna lie, I had a weird depressive down swing. I don’t know if I actually have clinical depression, but I wouldn’t be surprised. That rant and story will have to come another day. I’m going to chalk it up to many things, more stuff I won’t get into now. But I did have one.

So I fell off the band wagon HARD, rolled into the ditch, and had to lie there crying about it for a while. But, I’m back now, and going to work crazy hard (emphasis on the crazy) to get back on track. But if we never catch up, we are not going to beat ourselves up about it, because if we do that, then we will feel more and more stressed and then quit. And we cannot have that. We have also been using the royal we all this time and we don’t care because REASONS.

Writing Excuses Podcast Episode 10.16

The funny thing is, I took copious notes on this several days ago, but my son decided that writing was never going to happen while he was awake. That’s the first push-off the bandwagon I had. But I can’t blame him entirely.

Beginnings are still really hard, and I like that they say don’t write the first pages first. I often write the end before I write the beginning. The end often gets changed by the time I get to the end, but that’s fine. It’s a good ride to get there.

Mary gives us a good example of how the opening pages feel, like we are in a dark room and we are only shining around a flashlight to figure out our tone and our promises to be made.

Howard also talks about taking the paragraph and flipping the paragraph upside down. The last line needs to be first, often times. It’s an interesting problem that I hadn’t ever though about, and I may do this more often.

I also really like the idea that you should stress the first page and not necessarily the first lines. Specifically what’s important to the character, what they want.

This keeps getting stressed and I feel like I should stress it, too. Everyone wants something, and that’s what we focus on.

I want to write, more so, I want to write for people. So everything I do aims toward that goal. But I’m more complex than that. I also want my son to be happy and my husband, so I do everything in my power to make that happen. Even forgoing what I want to do (sit at my computer and write all day) to do things for them. Play with my son, cuddle my husband, or cook dinner for them that they enjoy. All things that makes them feel loved and happy and full fills what I am striving to do.

Writing Prompt

Write your first thirteen lines, and see how much you can fit into that space—character attitude, point-of-view, mood, genre, conflict, setting, and more.

The reason they give this prompt is because standard manuscript format means that the first page will only be thirteen lines. My Scrivener application will compile manuscripts like this, so I can easily see how the first page of my manuscript will look.

So, what does the first thirteen lines look like in my book?

"Normally, I never question your orders. I kill when you
tell me and when you are paying me. But this time it's too
risky. Convince me."
     "Ha! You're speaking like one of my clerks. You're sitting
in my office, drinking my bourbon, asking me to justify my
actions for the betterment of this world to you?"
     "I'm drinking a fine drink offered to me, along with a
comfortable chair, asking you to justify my actions to me."
     "Are you getting soft?"
     Silence.
     "I'll take that as no. We're shaping the course of events,"

So, what does this tell us about the book we are about to read?

  1. This is very spy like.
  2. There is conflict going on before we even get off the ground.
  3. The author isn’t going to tell us everything up front.

I’d say that hits all the marks it’s supposed to.

BOOM! NEXT.

#WritingExcusesChallenge Day 15

CONTINUATION!!!

Because we are getting to this episode.

Writing Excuses Podcast 10.15

World building how your wilderness works in a fantasty peice!!!

This is a wildcard episode and while it has some good questions for my fugitive story, the prompt has nothing to do with it. SO, I will not be doing the prompt for this episode, and will be posting the prompt for 10.14 separately, because it’s going to be LONG.

But let’s get to the notes and thoughts, shall we?

When we consider how your wilderness works, we are really asking, “How in the world would my character go camping in the world that I’ve built.” This is to make sure we don’t do a white room thing, where everything is improbable and we explain none of the trial fail cycles that usually go along with camping.

I grew up here in Alaska, and if you don’t hunt and fish and camp, you’re kind of not a true Alaskan. So wilderness survival is something I’m very familiar with, at least in the comfort of my own geographic area. If you dropped me in the middle of the Sahara, I would die.

This is point that they make in the podcast, but another good question to ask is “What is your character’s relationship with the great outdoors?” A computer tech will probably not be very competant in the outside (although a really great twist would be a techie who is SUPER prepared because they watch Bear Grylls while coding.), meanwhile big mean Lone Ranger archetype knows exactly what to do.

Basically the whole podcast episode can be boiled down to the question of, “If I threw my character into the middle of the woods, how would the ENVIROMENT effect them?”